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I feel like something is missing
A piece that was never there before
Something that I should have had but never known
Its absence forms a hole in my heart
Without this missing piece my world is off balance
The sun is never as bright
And the icy wind cuts through me
As cruel and unyeilding as a blade
Every day is somehow incomplete
I feel as if someone has taken a part of me and cut it away
My hope is running out
I fear I will never find this missing piece
But then I see you and the sky brightens
And I realize that you were what was missing all along
My world is now complete
©2008-2010 ~Kuro-shadow
:iconkuro-shadow:

Author's Comments

This is what happens when its nearly 12:00 on Thanksgiving and I am totally out of ideas. Not exactly my best work either... Oh, and for anyone who is wondering, this poem is about a book i was reading.

and if you have any suggestions for a better title, please tell me.

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:iconlewisjb3:
I like it, well written, (especially for being 12:00) ;) Keep it up

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Why is it that my life can be summed up in one name...
Moreover, a name that isn't mine...
:iconmoreuse:
I think it's a pritty good title. it's not bad at least.
:iconkuro-shadow:
thank you ^-^
i was so bored last night lol

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:iconkuro-shadow:
;) ty lewis

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:iconmoreuse:
ya that sucks. I know that fealing.
:icondarkdiarypeeker:
Yay! had a happy ending :aww:

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:iconkuro-shadow:
lol yeah, an unusual occurance for my poems

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:icondarkdiarypeeker:
Lol, :D

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:star: 4Kids Rapes Anime!!! :star:
:iconbennyboyzzz:
I get the feeling that somethings missing in my Life but I have no idea what that is nice poem u wrote ^__^

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