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I’ll always remember that feeling
As if we are the only two who exist
And all time stops, if only for a moment
My green eyes meet yours, sky blue and perfect
Our arms wrapped around each other
Embracing the one we can’t bear to loose

Before long time begins once more
To pull us apart and bring back cold reality
As quickly as it came, the dream vanished
Leaving me alone once again, to find my own way
Slowly opening my eyes I am faced with the truth
The one I embraced was not you
But a mere figment of my dreams
You do not exist, for if you did I would not be alone

The arms that embraced me and made me feel safe
Will never be more than a dream for me
This cruel world gives shelter to so many cruel people
Who try to rip me apart with their words and lies

If only someone half as wonderful as you did exist
If only I had someone to run to when the rain begins to fall
But for now I like the rain, for when it falls
I do not have to run inside to hide my tears
I can just let them fall without fear of discovery
For who can tell the difference between tears and rain?
©2008-2010 ~Kuro-shadow
:iconkuro-shadow:

Author's Comments

ok so its 11:35 Christmas break has offically begun and i decided to write a poem. :P for those of you rolling your eyes now, yes it is yet another depressing poem. and thank you for whoever reads this and comments on it.

(yes i admit i could have done better)

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:iconlyn10432:
ZOMG!!!!
-claps-
c: Yay I read somthing!!!
Yes this is rather depressing but it is really good! (:

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~ Just another Sasuke fan~
:3 These clubs own!!!!
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(: You have to love Michy and her art!
:iconkuro-shadow:
O.O you read one of my poems...
do you think im a freak now??? or like really really weird???

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:iconlyn10432:
xD Not at all, I think it is very good! (:

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~ Just another Sasuke fan~
:3 These clubs own!!!!
[link] [link]
(: You have to love Michy and her art!
:iconkuro-shadow:
ty! ^-^

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:iconlyn10432:
8D

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~ Just another Sasuke fan~
:3 These clubs own!!!!
[link] [link]
(: You have to love Michy and her art!
:iconkuro-shadow:
...have you read anything else?

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:iconlyn10432:
xD Bwahahahahaha~
:iconlionplz:

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~ Just another Sasuke fan~
:3 These clubs own!!!!
[link] [link]
(: You have to love Michy and her art!
:iconkuro-shadow:
D:

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i am but a mirror, i only reflect the light you cast upon me
:iconaltergrl1811:
i read it. its good! please dont short-hand yourself with your writing please...im the one that cant write well

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A room without books is like a body without a soul-G.K. Chesterton

The cheerleader
:iconlewisjb3:
And of course, it is very well written, (what else would it be, it's written by you) I like the way it flows.
The feelings it tries to get across are quite effective and well orginized.

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Why is it that my life can be summed up in one name...
Moreover, a name that isn't mine...

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